Thursday, September 4, 2008

Don't Throw Glass at People

At my current age of 17, I've learned the difference between right and wrong, stupid and smart, etc. However, I have slipped up more than once, but who hasn't? I've figured out then when someone tells you to do something, or dares you to do something, you don't always have to do it. The story I have to share definitely helped teach me that. Though I was young at the time, I don't think I'll ever forget it, or what it taught me.
I believe that I was in 2nd grade, which would've made me 8 years old. It was a perfectly pretty, warm day on the playground at Westchester Elementary, and I was just walking around after coming off the swings. I see one of my classmates standing by the large, wooden play-structure. Now, the classmate I saw wasn't always the nicest kid, but he was considered the class clown an he carried his label well. As I continued walking around, he yelled out, "Hey Kathryn, I dare you to throw this piece of glass at me," he was holding a triangle-shaped piece of glass in his hand he picked off the ground.
For a minute, I considered my options, throw it at him and miss, throw it at him and actual make a hit, or just don't do it. I, in all of my 8 year old wisdom decided to throw it. Now, he had to actually throw the glass to me so I could throw it at him, because for some reason neither of us would bring it or go get it. After he threw the glass to me, I examined it for a second, thinking if the glass would actually hurt him assuming I hit my 'target'. After I felt the edges a little, and gave it a brief, but thorough look-over, I decided it wouldn't hurt him. So, with my weak 2nd grader arms, I threw the glass. I figured I had missed, and I did, it landed about 3 feet away from him, so he was completely safe from harm. I'm pretty sure he knew it wouldn't have made it anyway. Thinking I was in the clear since no one saw me throw it but him, and the fact that I missed by an embarrassing length, he goes and runs to the teacher to tell on me. The first thing I did when I saw him running was start crying, I couldn't help it, but I was 8, either way, I was crying, and by the time the teacher got to me I must have looked like my puppy just died.
I explained myself to the teacher, but I still got in trouble. Although, my only punishment was writing a letter explaining what I did, and I had to get it signed by my mother, which was the part I didn't like. Seeing as I had no choice, I accepted my punishment and moved on with my life, but I don't think I'll ever forget doing that. Ever.
From my 2nd grade glass-throwing experience, I learned that just because someone dared you, or told you to do something, doesn't mean you should do it, especially if the person is a well known class clown. Since then, I haven't done anything anyone dared me to do, unless they were one of my close friends, and no one I really know would want to dare me to possibly hurt them. As for the guy who dared me to throw the glass at him, he's still going to school with me, however I haven't talked to him since maybe, 9th grade. So, if you're dared to throw glass at someone, don't do it, unless of course you want to get in trouble, then go on ahead, but don't make me say 'I told you so'.

5 comments:

GreeneMachine said...

I loved the story line, and you had a clear purpose. The only thing is you have trouble with comma splices a couple times, like when you said "Although, my only punishment was writing a letter explaining what I did, and I had to get it signed by my mother, which was the part I didn't like." But the grammar mistakes are all I can find fault in. I was sucked in by the title.
See you TOMORROW bright and early in the morning...

WithALittleHelpFromMyFriends said...

yeah, i have comma splice issues... glad you liked it :P

CMCEnglish said...

Great story! You give details to create tension to pull your audience through the story. Consider if you want to begin and end (as you do) with the lesson, or if you will have it in just one of those two places. This decision will help you tighten up the story. You may also want to play with the "people who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones" idea--your title is so close that you could make a humorous variation on the saying.

wolflikeme84 said...

*glares* title stealer! :P

I liked it. 'Course, I have already heard the story numerous times. It was still fresh and interesting. Good job!

GreeneMachine said...

Today in class when Ms. Cassell told us that some of us didn't comment properly on each others' blogs, I realized that I had forgotten that I had a list of things to comment about. I was just blindly commenting on your story. So, in an attempt to correct my mistake, I'll go ahead and give the prescribed comment:
First, your purpose is obviously to tell a story that explains the moral of not doing stupid things. Think before you act, all that good stuff.
Secondly, some specific details that 'showed' rather than 'told' were the dialogue between you and the nameless boy, your pristine description of the weather (which, by the way, set an awesome contrast between the perfect weather and the not-so-perfect decision you made), and the way you examined the glass before you threw it.
Finally, I can't think of anything I want to know more about. You seemed to tell the story completely and specifically (and I wouldn't know if you left something out, so I hope you didn't leave anything out). Kudos again to your story.